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25.01.2022 I havent previously written a brother and sister relationship. All other character interactions have this sexual tension if they are opposite sex. Alendis and Ratheis continually insult each other but work together when other problems are needing to be resolved. She is a sexy teen and Ratheis is a tall muscular early teens at the current writing stage. I will be making them grow together and protect each other. Alendis will end up being with Ratheiss friend Esnyx when they... meet up again. After not seeing each other for over 4 eons. Alendis and Esnyx will be highly attracted to each other. This is the 1st love story of this book. Ratheis himself as the main character wont really have a love story. I need his personality to be unlovable by any woman because he is holding within this evil which surfaces sometimes. Alendiss death will cause him to not control his emotions and become the pure evil. The story is good becomes bad, bad becomes good. See more
24.01.2022 A few pages of a Mafia story. I just made it up and went with it. Wet shimmering streets surf the lesser automobiles of the night. A drizzle blurs the puddles as headlights beam the alleys temporarily. A car, blue with white seams, stopping with whistling brakes by the gutter full of cigarette butts and yesterday’s newspaper trash. Flipping to a page of a former bad night about to become inferior. A shining set of shoes taps the cracked concrete. Dark fabric straight dress p...Continue reading
24.01.2022 Immortal Darkfire will be a good storyline. I am gathering more ideas for it each day. Just dont have time to write it probably until after christmas. The longer it takes me to begin writing, the better my ideas are becoming to make it more epic.
24.01.2022 Plot for Exile of Elisora. I begin the story a little dark and mysterious. A woman chained up in a cave. Suddenly she is attacked and a giant bat creature drinks her blood and she passes out. When she wakes, a little more is learned about her. A human figure comes and force feeds her insects. Making her chew them to keep her alive and produce more blood. The man is a crossbreed bayt and human. He feels a bit guilty about the treatment. Elisora escapes the rusty chains and att...Continue reading
24.01.2022 Waking to see his father struggling when unpacking the cart, Ratheis begins moving for his portion of final Zorlight work to start, To feed the horse and wash the muck from the timber wheels, He yawns loudly to display the fatigue he feels, Finish before Zorfall,... Moomy will keep a meal warm for you in the house, But you don’t come in until you are finished. Ranoudis states, Yes daady. Ratheis nods, Quickly unlatching the horses’ harness and leading to the stable, The thought now only about the hot steamy food on the table, A cloth is rinsed by the central fountain and a bucket is filled, Ratheis attempts to lift it, but splats of water are spilled, Fwei. A whisper is heard, A twist of attention brings eyes to search for who would say such a word, Causing a frown which may become permanent with age, Ratheis looks around for a sneaky individual to engage, A step in the shadows with a taller figure revealing, Persistent excitement proceeds after he identifies a particular male concealing, Esnyx? You hide so good, I didsn’t knew it was you. Ratheis laughs, Recognizing the features of his loftier brown body backdropped by scattered plants, Nearer to his age and known since they were younger infants, Is you almost finished? Esnyx questions, Beginning the sentence untutored and not enforcing to be correct, Ratheis recites at the jobs to do, which will upset his father if left to neglect, I just started. He replies, You always have to work. Esnyx mentions, I do this to help my family, Rathoudin is going to war afterday, And some of his restabilities will be mine. Ratheis explains, My elders said we never had to work until the Nothors arrived. Esnyx complains, What did they used to do? Ratheis wonders, Beginning to clean the pieces of the wooden wheel, Thinking of a workless life which Esnyx began to reveal, Anything they want, Ate when hungry, slept when tired. Esnyx shrugs, Oh, it would be better to live this way. Ratheis dreams, They lived in tree huts and were always outside, When hungry, the whole tribe went out to hunt food. Esnyx adds, It sounds so much better. Ratheis smiles, He said there was no fences. Esnyx says, All the animals would be anywhere? Ratheis frowns, Ignoring the quality of his work and only spreading dirt, Esnyx grins because his friend is no longer alert, Ol see you aftaday Rathy. He interrupts, Phasing Ratheis from his imagination to do anything on his mind, Waving his hand while glaring at the way the wheel is designed, Scrubbing harder to get the jobs finished before Zorlight becomes too dim, As a late orange glow slides below the great southern rim. See more
23.01.2022 Mystice concerns for the Kuhguard archers since all of them are exposed, Calling to Zunellz after knowing he wont listen to the information she disclosed, Move them back! Mystice yells, Making sure Zunellz heard but he chooses to ignore, Mystice squints to the firm edges which leave her unsure,... Leaping up the wall to resume studying the sections of the army below, Drenelor points his sword to add further to the show, A certain group shifts position which are covered in long cloth to conceal their intent, Dropping the cloaks to the ground and pulling the cords back to the full extent, Firing arrows simultaneously launched high and sharp downward lines begin to rain, Projectiles split on the stones, but most hit Kuhgard archers as several scream in pain, Zunellz passages under cover after a few rebound by his feet, Witnessing all of his bowmen dead with a swift singular accomplished defeat. See more
22.01.2022 I wasn't into mafia stories much. The person who I was helping begin this kind of story has given up before beginning. So I kept going. The world is created in my head too. What if world war 1 happened but world war 2 didn't. The 1950's would be quite different. Heaps of gangs would be trying to control things in the cities. This is what has resulted. Continued from the last post. Stashing the tommy under a bush along the sidewalk of the midtown park. He strides as a car app...Continue reading
22.01.2022 Aslight 26th Merely the vapours lifting indicate a dawning change, Elisora searches for hints of light within range, Reminded of the assurance of no more until afterday,... The confidence lifted to trust but nerves increase by delay, Once Zorlight falls, the Bayt will return for a bloodied feast, While the shivers of her loosening skin are dramatically increased, Tethered by old chains to an above limited location, Her eyes seek an escape, but too much variation, The knife hidden underneath the same brace around her wrist, Only a few more defined scrapes and perhaps a strengthened twist, A risk to take for a chance, but nude and weak to seek support, And what if the Bayts pursue and she is caught, More time to decide a plan which will not fail, The body is now mostly bones, while the air is stale. See more
22.01.2022 The book i am writing (6) and the book i am editing (1) did a cross over. Mystice takes a book from the many in Pams vast collection, Some have never been opened in the higher selection, She flips the pages and reads about the ancient winged kind,... When individuals rode Dragons because their needs were combined, Labeled to be the Drakthorn fighting against the enforcers unnamed, A drawing indicating size with teeth, scales, wings and homes below are enflamed, One in particular flies above known as Draxxon the cold, A scene depicting an army of men calling them The controlled, Mystice experiences a memory of the motionless Uzaofan men on the field, Unresponsive to her presence when Molvaan kneeled, Diverting her thoughts to the book when turning to the next page, There stands the man shrouded in darkness exhibiting rage, Glowing veins on the arms resemble the lightning around, Bodies of death raise terror in the dirts of the ground, Ratheis the immortal darkfire was the title he is known, With the assistance of Draxxon, the Pengordian city was overthrown, Men and women burned by the blazes also coloured blue, Nothing could stand against them after his powers grew, The illustrations have a passion for intensifying the impression, Spits of scattered flicks indicate the artist struck with aggression, Individuals with magic were taken to have the energy extracted, While the devoted followed him as though they were all attracted, Carving sculptures of Ratheis to influence a duplication of his existence, Eventually he was defeated by a small group resistence, Mystice places the book down when amazed if this is all fact, Realizing the dragons are strong and can make an impact. See more
20.01.2022 A piddle into depth of water puzzles Alendis awake, Her brow strengthens a frown by the reflecting the glare ache, Seriously close the fucking door when you peepoo. She complains, Expectant it is Ratheis but instead it is her father finalizing his drop, She stands to prepare for the dawning and begin planting the next line of crop,... Ranoudis appears less motivated than the previous week, Becoming annoyed each time other people loudly speak, Ratheis is sighted at the table, while Alethein serves his meal, The tension in the room is felt as it almost becomes surreal, Where did you go last night? Ranoudis asks, Pouring himself a drink and expecting an answer to his question, Gulping down the liquid to cover over the rising indigestion, Merely for a walk. Alethein shrugs, Dismissing the reason for her departure to the simplest of facts, Remembering all the previous meetings and spontaneous sexual acts, Ranoudis appears to accept the excuse when he pours another drink, While Ratheis remains silent but knows the destinations of acts they think, His father believes many different occurrences while she wallows in self-blame, The hatred is growing between but will never surface from their hidden shame. See more
19.01.2022 The water compression dulls to an annoying tapping trickle, As Jampz assists to remove her soaked clothing while his fingers accidentally tickle, Sighting her finally in the vision he always wanted since the day they met, Naked in a kneeling position with her dark hair soaking wet, He reaches over and begins caressing with his hand across her face,... Touching the smoothness lightly as he begins to trace, Still not believing longings all happened on this day, And convinced by her actions prior, Mystice feels the same way, Standing up and supporting as she holds tightly his hand, Adventuring to his bedroom for the nights activities unplanned, She lays on his covers as admiration increases from also wanting to see, Not knowing what to do or what position he should be, Do whatever you want to me. She insists, Allowing him to crawl as he points his finger between her thighs, Causing her to feel the shove unexpected from the disappointment in her eyes, Not the right thing to do? He wonders, Lead up to something like that. Mystice recommends, He touches her on the face and kisses her with his lips to lead for venturing below, Inching down her neck and unsure of which way he should go, She arches her back and he places both his hands with tongue on her breasts, Wrapping his arms around and combining their bare chests, A tremble forms a wanting in her eyes with submissions of receiving more, Lost as what to do as his first time makes him entirely unsure, Mystice takes his hand and glides it over her sensitive skin, Then he begins to learn so the adventure of her body can begin, Allowing his instincts to take control by caressing respectively each delicate place, Rising to stroke her lips and adore her beautiful face, Inserting himself deeply which is almost too pleasing to reserve, Jampz slithers in and out while running his hands over every curve, Sipping and shuddering respires moaning with quivering tweaks releasing out, Stepping up the momentum and retaining the compulsion to shout, He is careful and moves slowly when seeing she likes it a little less extreme, Warming up from the movement as she takes it into a dream, Sinking into the bed as the needs echo the accomplished desires, Her beauty is adored alike his body drips from places he perspires, Binding for to the increased movement with urges about to burst, Reducing into the covers as her preferences are all immersed, Arching over her whence the irresistible ejaculation rivals the affection, Mystice exhales a sigh by wallowing in the sensation of perfection, Deep inhales and exhales into the pillow crumpled under her twisted hair, Staring at the ceiling with soft stroking after the moment the desperation had to share. See more
19.01.2022 I asked for opinions on a fantasy writers site on the differences between our world and the world i have created. Mostly i focused on the planet + moons rotation and reproductive cycle of people and animals. I got a better reaction on a sci-fi writers site instead. In the world of Erphedra, people and animals cannot just get pregnant. They must perform the sexual act during an eclipse. The sexual desire burns more in people with magic abilities. The actual conception is energ...y based within all creatures of the world. This causes people to be all born around the same times. A pregnancy only lasts a month in humans. Other species all depends on size as to how long the pregnancy lasts. Dragons lay eggs but dont need an eclipse to allow the conception. If the egg is exposed to certain elements or a type of magic, it will absorb that surrounding energy and hatch with that power. Strong wind blows against the shell of an egg = wind dragon (white, thin, blue eyes) An eclipse cannot always be predicted, the south side of the planet always faces the sun (Zor) at a tilted angle, this makes a day and night still happen closer to the middle section and the south is normally still lit. Sometimes the larger pink moon Shardrella blocks the southern light and it pulls the blue smaller but closer moon (Safyrik) across. The combination creates a purple glow on the planet and everyone becomes horny. An eon or year is not the planet of Erphedra going around the Zor. The planet and the 2 moons have their own orbit and bring each other closer to the Zor for the warmer months and pulled away for the cooler months. They are going around the Zor, but the whole length in eons is around 4000. It is split into sections of the 1st, 2nd, 3rd and 4th cycle. Current book is within the 3rd 479th rotation. When it reaches 1000. it will be 4th 1st rotation. In the middle of winteth, the pink moon blocks the zorlight completely from the planet and everything in the northern hemisphere snap freezes for around 3 - 5 days. Most animals have adapted to this time and no eclipse is possible while this happens. Most people go south during this time to escape this freeze. Others have underground areas to stay for that time. The north used to be habitable and has many frozen ruins with sculptures of animals and dragons previously served by early humans.
19.01.2022 First 3 pages of Immortal Dakrfire. After going over it a few times to get it perfected. Immortal Darkfire. The Rise of Ratheis....Continue reading
18.01.2022 Decorations hang from every loose branch or notch in the grit, Carved wooden creatures holding bowls of candles lit, Animals of the lands detailed and sculpted into common situations, Some of the shapes are of beasts in far away locations, Food is plentiful but raw and unrefined,... Men and women leave scraps after they dined, Simply moving on when they make a large enough mess, The care for simple behaviors appears to be much less, Each person of the tribes does a different part, Taking only what they need when traveling on a cart. See more
18.01.2022 Unlike the previous books, i have written the entire plot for Immortal Darkfire. I know the whole story from start to finish. The main character Ratheis at age 10 will see his older brother go with the Ry tribesmen off to fight against the northern Pengordians. Later his father is only handed a note to get news of his death. Slaughtered along with the entire army of the Ry. No body is returned and none survived. I skip a few eons later when the occupation of the Pengordians h...as settled. Armies marched in and took control over everything, People live under the law of the Pengordian city. Ratheis just works but holds an inner hatred for the Pengordians for killing his brother. When his sister is raped by a Penguard. He kills this soldier but is injured in the process. His own father takes responsibility for the murder and is hanged for his crime. Ratheis builds such hatred a blue energy flows and he heals quickly. Also witnessing his childhood friend being hanged because the local subleader Pengordian just felt like it. Ratheis and his sister escape but leave their mother behind. Seeking refuge among the Melxan people of the Schnugler mountains. Training begins on how to fight. See more
18.01.2022 I am currently swapping portions of my books with other writers. So far the verse aspect seems to either cause them to become mute or makes them really enjoy it. I also have been reading the portions they give me. One is quite good and i have got into the story about ancient irish pre-recorded history. Another which is written in a vampire, lycan, psychic fantasy society, has not grasped my interest. yet the historic one has.
18.01.2022 Going waaaaaaaay way back. To the beginning just to add the scenery descriptions so i can catch up to the current book again. Wont be much, people descriptions, places, clothing, landscapes. Someone even said, remove the "Person speaking for a while" She expresses or informs. Just put, SAID. (not changing that) So here is the beginning of Mystic Darkfire. Juch 24th...Continue reading
18.01.2022 More Immortal Darkfire. I am writing the 10 year old part at the beginning which normally introduces the characters. Its 20 pages so far. A friend of Ratheis called Esnyx is a native to the area and his father and older brother were hanged. This is the emotional response afterwards. Distraught shakes and shivers cause rubbing eyes enough to turn red,... Rage swirls within headaches when mourning the current dead, Ratheis shuts the door and sees his friend showing the equivalent retribution, Displays of death and blood to seek revenge for his familys empty execution, Blames for blue metal armour and insignias of red and gold, Foggy breaths in the darkness exhibit the depth of nightly cold, Esnyx craves attacking Arthak and breaking all his bones with a rock, A doubtful ability of survival sneaks beyond the mist of shock, He has no strength to perform the actions he imagined moments ago, Returning to the bedroom and unwillingly moving slow. See more
17.01.2022 Another rewrite for the opening scene of Kin Tru Dur (might even change the name) Eventually a warrior influences a peak of accuracy to become proficient in the mind, Shall his focus be intoned and narrow with all thoughts aligned, Sharpening a metal committed with the rough stone in hand, Sliding grinds of scratching streams for a superiors demand,... Rippling heat wobbles the visualizing of outdoor bright reflections, A grasp for the tools of the smith, after a deciding hand hovers the collections, Hammering the sparks expelling streams of trails when turning slow, Illuminating a stare so deep into the curious orange glow, Words of unimportance said to disrupt the task of a weapon being made, Rotating as a bead of sweat drops and sears on the finished blade. Attempts are made to sleep against the stone near the crunching fire, Dirtied surrounds of eyes unblinking to dream for a long-lost desire, Flickering flames in the pit shape into the dancing bodies of allure, Curves of swirling naked feminine maidens provoke the thoughts of the impure, Formerly calming the demanding intent throughout the daily strains, Shutting over eyes tight after the imprinted flame remains, Torrents of nude bodies enchant for being held in grips of passions warm, Beyond the bright cover lurks the unknown intent in a disguised form, Light taken into sleep holds them back for a times length enough, Or the relaxation needed from the nights turning and twisting may be rough, A consistency nearer the warms and flames alight a relaxing stream, Submissive for the fatigue to allow the observance to be drawn into a dream.
17.01.2022 Mystice sleeps with her arms around Jampz when Palaya knocks, She opens the door slightly to remain calmed down from her own initial shocks, I am so happy to see her back. Palaya says, I am too, everything is good, like you said Palaya. Jampz expresses, Filled with high emotions and gripping her tight,... Palaya lays down on the other side with an invite, Grum also enters and assumes a place by sitting in a chair, While other friends come in and Jampz strokes her hair, We are her family and we have to support her, So nothing like this happens. Palaya says, They have to kill all of us before they get to her. Grum discloses, She will never be in danger while I breathe. Acurek announces, And she will be our saviour. Clord suggests, We will devote our lives to her service. Foenda pledges, Causing everyone to nod and Mystice raises her head with hair a complete mess, Seeing people looking at her amazed, while she has a headache from the stress, You all need to shut the fuck up or Ill kill you. Mystice complains, They quickly leave the room but only Jampz and Palaya stay, Keeping Mystice calm with not another word to say. See more
16.01.2022 The fire burns brightly and Grum sits near it staring at the flame, Mystice finishes cooking their last piece of food for all the same, Cutting it up and giving equal portions, which Foenda is not used to, Seeing Mystice is kind to all people by creating a different point of view, Jampz bites into his food and chews a long length to savour his food,...Continue reading
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15.01.2022 Ratheis digs in the dirt, checking the seeds are sprouting roots already, The Ry slaves keep watch as another rock removal causes the wall to become unsteady, Covering the stone under the ground to hide amongst the rest, Alendis becomes suspicious with her appearance unexcitingly dressed, Sighting a Penguard walking to the edge of the western wall,... Another joins him, which the weight causes a portion to fall, Boulders roll and the wood supports snap under the tilted strain, The two Penguards topple to impact and shout in an amount of pain, Ratheis runs to them, kneeling when he attempts to assist, Sighting the imagery of the Ry slaves anger, when they try to resist, What is happening Rathy? Alendis asks, I didnt read the Rys intentions. He whispers, Stepping back before the more Penguards arrive, Obviously hearing the collapse and wondering if their own survive, Come on Alendis. Ratheis grips, Becoming angry and steering her away from the scene, He brings her back to the field and checks the gate gaps between, Sighting Arthak with his Penguards holding spears and shields, Pointing to surround the residents, because they are not on the fields, A Ry elder steps forwards to represent intentions of the crowd, Artura watches from the top of the wall as if the purpose was allowed, Step away from them! Arthak orders, His son by his side becoming excited this is happening on his first day, The Ry people dont move and dig their feet to reveal they will stay, You cant have them back until you agree to our terms. A Ry woman speaks, Terms? You have two of my men, There are at least fifteen of you. Arthak squints, Slaughter them father. Dryzak whispers, Imagining the Penguards cutting into the slaves with blood soaking the ground, As he looks towards the field to envision an action additionally profound, There are no terms for slaves. Artura voices, Speaking from the edge of the collapsed section, Holding a sword to display his shadow revealing a fearsome projection, Ratheis observes as Alendis begins sobbing about the outcome resulting in death, She grips her brother so tight it causes him to outward his breath, Save them Rathy. She begs, Its too late Alendis. Ratheis admits, His shaking hand covers her eyes to hide the end of the negotiated dealings, Protecting her vision but never able to guard her invested feelings, Screams and shouting are heard with abrupt stopping, Until the only remnants resonating are the recognized meat chopping. See more
15.01.2022 I am up to a point in Immortal Darkfire where i can stop and get back to it later. I need to add the scenery and descriptions of characters into my first book, Mystic Darkfire. I lacked these parts as i just wanted to get the story done. Focusing on only the characters personalities and only roughly describing pieces of the area and people. Now i can just filter through, get it done and finally publish something.
13.01.2022 Shadows stretch from the base of the thirsty trees, As a northern wind blows a surface skin freeze, Randomized rocky grounds cause the cart to have uneven slants, Ranoudis corrects the horses direction after brushing the plants, Almost home son. He reveals,... Looking over to Ratheis fast asleep against the wooden slat, Covered up under a traded tightly weaved dirty mesh mat, Home is in sight, which brings some added relief, Passing by the outer Ryguardians to be received by the chief, Woouim shimuai. He greets, Woouim shudali. Ranoudis replies, Speaking the southern native words which he learned in his youth, A smile is received by the senior tribesman revealing a front missing tooth, Bringing supplies from the middle-north to trade with the men of the south, The younger tribesman takes a block of soap and puts it in his mouth, Er no that is for cleaning. Ranoudis explains, Observing the man resume chewing and then swallowing a large piece, The wrinkles on his forehead dramatically increase, Adjusting to the taste and introduced digestion, Regretful about not listening to the traders suggestion, More? He asks, Deciding to get them since the smell is nice, Ranoudis gives a basket without needing to warn twice, An exchange is made when another tribesman throws assorted furs, Respect is shown for the assurance there will be future transfers. See more
12.01.2022 I have decided to write the first page of each of my books. Just to get the ideas flowing. This is the last book. Mystic Darkfire: Shadow of the Dreamon. Sizzling fire churns amid the smoke above sloshing turbulent waves,... Floating deathly silhouettes motionless among submersed aquatic graves, Defined boarded walls of timber enclose the inner enlightened section, Bouncing the shadows beyond the surface of the metallic bawble reflection, Sealed away within is the embodiment of a sorceress locked inside, The vessel tilts under the pressure and various objects activate the slide, Instability momentums a roll accumulating speed of the circular profile, An edge in the path allows a descent towards a treasured items pile, Hardened pieces endure the impact of the withered etched sphere, Cracking the exterior and causing a piercing purple rupture to appear, Bursts of illumination pulse with gaps penetrated by streams of light, Forming amongst the debris fiery flakes dropping from a height, Splashes of salty water below and fire consuming the skeletal remnants of a ship, Adrift her figure restores to naked form and she reaches her hand out to grip, Unaware of the present situation being a danger or concern, A fleck of stinging ember touches and she senses the tiny burn, Not longer immune to the heated extremes of fire, Escape from this situation becomes her only expressive desire. See more
11.01.2022 I made a character called Puu which is a little spidermonkey/kitten creature which Mystice picks up along the way. I needed to add more of this character, he is only in the book for a short time and doesnt come back into the story. Mystice stands and arches to crack the places her muscles allow, She walks back to the road with sweat across her brow, We should drink soon,... This is taking longer than I expected. Mystice says, With Puu poking his tongue out panting from the heat, He keeps his eyes open especially for food to eat, Mystice strokes his tail while reading a sign, Another eight thousand steps if in a straight line, How long now? Puu asks, Another Zorour maybe. Mystice says, I will sleep on your milky sacks until we get there. Puu yawns, He curls against her cleavage enjoying the position under her neck, Mystice becomes shocked at his invasive snuggling as she stops to check, Her feet too small to fit in the loose boots which causes them to slip, Puu moves down her top with some excessive places he chooses to grip, Alright, this is not happening, My milky sacks are not for your comfort. Mystice demands, Grabbing him on the scruff and pulling him out to walk alone, Puu becomes unresponsive while pouting on the hard stone, Shivering to pretend he is cold and shuffling when forcefully endearing, Rubbing his upper arms and bending knees with an upward motion of eyes tearing, Dont be like that. Mystice frowns, Why do you wear clothes? He asks, Because I would be cold because my skin is soft. Mystice explains, I know, I just wondered why your kind evolved this way, Mine have hair all over. Puu frowns, Come on, a storm is coming and we need to find shelter. Mystice advises, Holding out her hand which allows him to ride her shoulder once more, As they keep moving down the trail, even with her feet sore. See more
11.01.2022 Family names for Immortal Darkfire. (His Father) Randor (His mother) Oriudis (Her father) Gorthein (Her mother) Aleandra (Man)Ranoudis + (Woman)Alethein... (1st son) Rathoudin (Daughter) Alendis (2nd son) Ratheis Names are made from a combination of Father first letters and last for mother for boys. while daughters are first of mothers and last of father. First son ++++---- Second son ++--++-- First daughter ----++++ Second Daughter --++--++ Yes if the people have say 7 kids. Letters can be taken from the grandparents too. Producing a name such as Orithdor or Gorthandra.
10.01.2022 Darkfire Abilities. In all the books so far, a Darkfire has a special pure energy which causes their veins to glow a particular colour. I made them all different shades. Ratheis has a deep blue and his primary influence over others is fear. Other people will serve him through being afraid of him. Baybes power was love or lust. Using Red energy which also works with some fear or respect. She only began learning to control others using her abilities when people felt something ...for her from a highly emotional moment. Mystice in the first 3 part series used Purple energy. She never completely mastered her abilities. People also which felt love for her seemed to feel it stronger after seeing her glow purple. Her main use of the energy was to teleport and cast the odd very powerful spell. Most other magically talented Humans, Shypies and Dragons have a full glow of orange or bluish white. None can match the intensity of a Darkfire.
09.01.2022 Darkening shadows push black sightlessness over a coloured field, Blood turns to grey blemishes on the surface paint of a damaged shield, A sword left pitched into the dirt to claim the soil, Zarts consume and lay eggs on the decaying meat left to spoil, Ranoudis keeps watch and counts the Pengordian dwellers remaining,... Each appear rough with various injuries which would need further explaining, A blind eye, missing teeth, a severed limb to count many sorts, An elderly man struggles to move as his body twists an contorts, Supporting a spinal injury eons ago which should have left him dead, But his body healed and he resumed in the enforcers instead, Himjor also remains to become a resident of the small town, Short hair, dark and balding head over a Mullipulz knitted gown, The southern heat does not gift such a thick fabric ever desired, Overseeing the builders have finished the construction required, A platform of wood up high, visible sections beneath the floor, Overhanging stronger logs to bring the realization of what it is for, What have they built father? Ratheis asks, Sipping a drink and discovering another pain in his neck, Ranoudis looks at his injured son with a cautious check, The Pengordians hang people for crimes, This creation is made from my spare woodpile, I was going to burn it next Winteth. He informs, Hang people? By the feet? Ratheis misunderstands, No, the rope is tied around the neck. Ranoudis fears, Revealing to Ratheis the painful moment of seeing this occur in the past, Hopeful to never experience it again and the first to be the last. See more
09.01.2022 Book cover Designs. The 1st one I painted and enhanced in a computer. 2nd I like the most. 3rd is alright but might need a darker purple. 4th was edited by a friend.... I could take all the good pieces from each of them to make another. Like the colours of 2 and position of 3. See more
09.01.2022 I write my books usually where only a short time is skipped. I did this in Immortal Darkfire. 4 Eons skipped over to show the character development. In Mystic Darkfire. It is day to day and each Zorour. I could have some months skip when Mystice is in the school and training with a skilled fighting master. Also a short time to skip when she reaches the city she wants to settle. These skipped times can show the skills being learned better. Of course i will have to correct these time differences in the 2nd book running along side the events.
08.01.2022 Over 100 short biographies written about each Dreamon/ Mystic Darkfire/ spin offs Character. I have made each character have their own talents and unique personalities. With them the possibility of their own stories if my imagination keeps going. I dont know if i would have time to write all of them. So i have just been sticking to the main characters with the most unique personalities and powers for my main series. Keeping the others as side characters only to support the mains.
07.01.2022 The Jampz and Mystice love story was not my first thought when writing this book. I was going to have Mystice have many different people she tried to settle with. Instead I gave him a purpose as her reason to fight for peace and happiness. The male lover is not strong or able to fight. He just loves the main character. Relaxing on the pillow as Palaya leaves the room and closes the door, Jampz lays next to Mystice as his eyes continue to adore, I love you Mystice. Jampz say...Continue reading
07.01.2022 Mystic Darkfire has been edited at least 6 times. 1st while 2nd was being written to match them up because they are the same timeline and sometimes cross over. 2nd time was after book 3 was half way through. 3rd time i skipped over it to correct little continuity mistakes. 4th time, It needed some touch ups and changed a part which annoyed me. 5th time I made the sentences flow a little better. Removed the words, that thinking then... 6th time, I went over it slowly and I think i am happy with it. See more
06.01.2022 I havent put anything here for a while. Interacting with other writers lately. After sharing the first 30 pages of Immortal Darkfire with a three people, I have found my style is difficult for writers to get into at first. Like a kind of barrier. 2 of them pushed by it. Once these people get by this hump, they can continue and moved on to say all the usual stuff. "The rhyming almost vanishes and the story flows. I want to know more, this is epic."... Over years when another writer sees my style and doesnt bother getting by this barrier. They immediately go to mentioning i should write like an already famous style. Quotes and links from Shakespeare, Dr Suess and the Beowulf novel show up to bore me. These people try to tell me more than that by pushing me towards research already done by professors in American college and UK university on the various points of poetry and that they mention the two cannot be mixed. I am so sorry but humans communication skills have not reached a peak and this is all that is. Some experiments needs to be done to further our understanding. If we write and perform all the same shit, nobody will advance.
06.01.2022 Walking across the road and seeing her door opened wide, She steps into the entrance when still believing she tried, Palaya walks from the kitchen to hug Mystice as her first thing, Holding tightly around her and happy she kept together everything, How did it all go sweetness? Palaya wonders,... It was manageable until today. Mystice reveals, What happened today? Palaya asks, Well, I knocked Zudon out last night, Stole the Canliar cure from him, Saved my Biraptor friend Lukondor, Left Solge with them so he can hunt Goalats on the mountain, Came back and convinced Zudon to fight back against Uzaofa, I have been sleeping with Jampz in a highly loving sexual relationship, I only made it back to see him, Pam just said I failed because of a small mess, And she shut the door in my face, And the people of Kuhelchor call me their saviour. Mystice exhales, That sounds rough, some tea? Palaya offers, I would love some. Mystice smiles. See more
05.01.2022 A fight scene between a half breed Bayt and chubby human. Darak is also trying to keep parts of him hidden or he would be identified as a crossbreed. Walking towards the circle as an attendant efforts to remove his cloak, Darak glares at him instead of using the simple word he spoke, The opponent steps through, also hairy with sweat increasing,... Causing Darak to turn his head because a smell is releasing, I am going to kick that hat off you head. The fighter points, Clenching his fists and receiving a pat from Hirrovam for support, Darak sniffs the air, identifying siblings performing the equal sport, From Hyveria city, Hirrock the brutal, Versus Darak the pale black hat man. The announcer jokes, Everyone in the crowd laughs and point at him keeping his disguise, Darak holds back the annoyance and watches his opponent with his eyes, The bell rings and Hirrock secures up his fists, Only performing a dance while intimidation persists, Jabbing at Darak’s face but not impacting at all, Hirrovam taps to make a noise on the wooden interior wall, Hit him, he is just standing there. He orders, Both look to the elder brother as Hirrock swings hard, Darak lifts his arm to block and uses his wrist to guard, One punch forces Hirrock back to almost stumble, His brother becomes angry and hits the wall to rumble, Hirrock tries again, performing the same move as before, This time Darak flicks his eye and trips him to the floor, A smile almost surfaces when the crowd becomes impressed, Searching for Elisora impatient because a seriousness was addressed, Hirrock stands and blinks wildly to gain a depth perception, Dancing around to intimidate further which is met with bad reception, Swinging hard, Hirrock swipes air as Darak leans backward to the ground, Using his wings to launch up and lift from the rebound, Flipping over Hirrock and impacting the side of his head, Dazing him for a moment as his next fist is forced to embed, Hirrock bends to the side when his head slams before his feet kick, Sensing steps behind, Darak avoids by being quick, Hirrovam had entered, angry when his brother lost the match, Launching towards Darak but he is difficult to catch, Holding his hat when he sprints up a pillar to flip, Punching Hirrovam hard but being caught by his grip, I am going to kill you, pale man. He threatens, Darak digs his nail into a sensitive place in the hand, Poking him in the eye until reaching a more desperate demand, Kicking between the legs to jolt the testicles from their usual location, Hirrovam drops Darak and he pushes him over for a standing ovation, Checking the hat is still firmly covering the top of his ears, Annoyed by the loudness of the crowds continuing cheers. See more
05.01.2022 This type of scene which goes from outside to inside and a conversation to actions. I cant fit in (without running out of rhymes) the details of what the other people are wearing. Only enough to describe the structure they are in. I thought about cutting it up to say what Zudon and Zunellz look like. The streets are dark and only a few people are seen, Mystice sneaks along the roads and alleyways in between, Not wanting to be noticed and adjusting her dress before slipping i...Continue reading
05.01.2022 Porvenor 29th 479e A new day of Zorlight peers over the south western border, Sleeping bag, preserved grains, and tools are set in order, Ranoudis inhales deeply before needing to express his moods,... While Alendis fills a snack sack with more preserved delicious foods, Have a safe journey my son. Ranoudis says, Speaking to Rathoudin and pressing him on the shoulder, Assisting to lift a bag, which feels like it carries a large boulder, I will father. Rathoudin replies, Ratheis exits his room with hair jagged for the dawning, Amusing his older brother, while greeting by presented yawning, Gud dawning. He says, Inspecting all the objects after forgetting his brother is leaving, Doubting it was all true, but a dream he didn’t begin believing, The sudden knowledge refilling to cause guilt for a higher range, Approaching Rathoudin to initiate a hug which appeals strange, I won’t see you for a long time? Ratheis concerns, Not for a while younger brother. Rathoudin nods, Tempting Ratheis to smile by an emotional situation, A last excitement building before the long waiting duration, You need to come back, Because I need to beat you in our game, Next time I will have a dragon. Ratheis reveals, I trust you will take care of the dragon until I return. Rathoudin gifts, The Dragon will be much bigger by then. Ratheis quivers, Releasing the grip and allowing him to speak to another, Rathoudin steps in front of his crying sister and mother, Make sure you keep your shoes dry, And change the lower garments regularly, And Alethein reminds, I will be fine mother. Rathoudin interrupts, Touching the chin of Alendis to raise her gaze up into his own, A doubt of his return and from the north, he could die alone, Don’t dread for me younger sister. Rathoudin declares, I am still allowed to be worried. Alendis frets, Receiving a touch on the shoulder to show an understanding, Ranoudis is the final to speak, as the time is becoming demanding, The tribesmen are here, It is time to go. He reveals, Pointing to the door and outside three Ry horsemen wait, Rathoudin lifts his bags prepared to not be late, Stepping across the dirt and strapping the belongings to the saddle side, He struggles a little to climb on effortlessly to begin the long ride, Oofa. The Ry tribesman commands, Pulling the horse to follow his northern direction, Ranoudis nods to them to keep his son under their protection, The family watches as their eldest fades into the foggy reserve, A flood of tears blurring the vision, when they can no longer observe. See more
05.01.2022 Another author is writing an episode script about cowboys in space. I have been helping him come up with ideas. Some of which he will not use. My brain made this title up and I wrote what entered my head. I also wanted to get my head out of the rhyming which it is stuck in. The main character here is the person from his book. I have let him see this too just for entertainment purposes. Episode 1. Descending to Terra. Rattling rails tapping the hull of the metal funnel enclose...Continue reading
04.01.2022 Placing her hands together to swap the knife to the left side, The metal brace is thinner and she initiates the first slide, Scratching at the cylinder tightened by a sturdy bolt, Elisora squints for a moment to see her own attempt at fault, It’s only screwed in. She giggles,... Passing the blade to the right hand and using it to turn, No sounds of scratching to alert any nearby for concern, Twisting the screw by utilizing the knife alike a tool, The latch opens the brace as she descends into her own urine filled pool, An inhale deeply inflates to sigh her disgust at the current situation, And the right-hand brace snaps to allow her other foot to step in the same location, Snickering during a step away from the filth below her for a time, A suddenly impacted emotion surfaces when she sweeps away the grime, Freedom is a step closer and the feeling begin to overwhelm, And a wanting desire returns for her to socialize among the civilizations of the realm. See more
04.01.2022 Mystic Darkfire. I removed the words, then, thinking, and Something from the whole book and actually put the detail in for the somethings. Changed Thinking to suit the situation by replacing it with discerning, decisive, or deciding. Then is only used in some dialogue. Now i only have to write descriptions of people, building interiors, landscapes and focus a little more on the actions. I am also going to skip time in a few sections by maybe a month around 3... times in the book. Some parts just seem to quickly resolved if time has not passed. THEN. Mystic Darkfire will be finished. See more
01.01.2022 Over 100 pages into 1st book where I was correcting mistakes and adding scenery/character appearance details. I keep getting distracted by the story and continue reading because its exciting. Does this mean it is done and who cares about what something looks like?
01.01.2022 I have written 3 pages into Immortal Darkfire. Then since some experts hated that my style is rhyming. I decided to write the 4th page in traditional style in an attempt to see if i can do it. I suck at traditional writing. My story has to rhyme or it doesnt work. So some further checking, one of the most critical experts which keeps saying no, dont do that has only a 2 star rating for her novels on amazon and other websites. The reviews about her work are mostly mentioning its boring so I will continue my style.
01.01.2022 Animals talking: I have several non-humanoid species which talk. 1. Panthedators are a panther alike cat which have very pointed ears and all black fur. Glowing yellow eyes and are larger than a panther. They also speak but have a limited range. 2. Zards are an ancient species of scaled upright walking lizards. They speak and also have their own language. The knowledge is passed down from the parent or a human coming in contact with the egg. (this ability also happens to dragons) It is known as tainting the egg. A zard hatched will soon after have actual memories of those which have touched the egg. 3. Canayne is a dog species, they know words but very simple speech range. They have only been able to speak in the last 700 eons. Domesticated types can put together sentences while the wild types can only say a few words.
